Beth
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Thank you for your review! I checked your note regarding me stating "In my professional life..." twice. I actually wrote "In my personal life...", then " In my professional life...".
Candice
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Thank you so much. Your detailed information is so helpful.
Melissa
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Thank you sooooo much! Yes you helped me greatly! I love this feature. I will have so much more help this way.
Blessings to you and thank you
Candice
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Hi Aisha,
Thank you for the detailed feedback and guidelines. Your remarks about the last section of the paper did not state that I should tie back my experience to the Lucy v. Zehmer case. Do you think I should try to do so? thank you.
Catherine
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This was very helpful, providing actual examples of where in the paper to add a comma or add a transition word was helpful along with your thorough explanation, thank you!
Tristan
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If there are any grammatical or punctuation errors, it would be more helpful if I was advised of where those errors are. I did proofread my paper and came to the tutor for help. It is not helpful to say I have errors but not say where.
Charlie
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Tutor writes: However, I would be more than happy to review this rubric in detail for the next session. But what is my way to proceed on to the next session?
Shakira
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This feedback was extremely helpful, which included examples for clarity. Would it be possible to have you review projects in the future?
Lucy
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Thank you for your help. The shift into first person is something I meant to correct, I had put the scene in Bert's first person but a former tutor suggested to use 3rd. I missed an "I."
Lucy
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Thank you, I had already re written the post when I opened your feedback, maybe you can read my new post.
Elizabeth
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This was extremely helpful. Thank you for your input and time. I truly appreciate it!
Dana
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Thank you so much for all your support! For some reason, the references were displaying on a separate page on my end, which is a bit odd, and it still seems to look different on your side. I truly appreciate your time, effort, and helpful feedback!
Stephanie
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Thank you very much for the feedback. I will be resubmitting for my final feedback review
Robert
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I want to ask some questions and point out things missed. For example I highlighted my these do I need to state the thesis at the top of the page?
Roger
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Thank you for your feedback.
Ricardo
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Thank you for the help and constructive points that I will use in my adjustments.
Christopher
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This review has been beneficial for my development of this essay. On my primary copy I do have headers and a cover page, I took it off on the copy I sent since Tutor told me to delete any names/e-mai from the document. Thank you for your feedback!
Sandra
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Thank you so much! I'm posting the new version. I hope you can look to the new version for me. Thank you so much!
Lucy
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Thank you for your valuable time and suggestions.
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